When reading this report, you should remember that the primary decision maker about home products and the controller of a family's discretionary spending is a woman.
28 September 2011
Women Use Social Media More Than Men, Says Study
When reading this report, you should remember that the primary decision maker about home products and the controller of a family's discretionary spending is a woman.
Google+ Gets an Early Resurgence in Users
27 September 2011
Interesting Article for Your Short Reports
Facebook Gets Stomped
One More for the Virgin
26 September 2011
Online US Advertising Growing
Forget New Wave of Social Media for B2B Marketing
25 September 2011
Class Moved to Dana 22
General Mills Revives 1970s "Heroes" for Marketing Campaign
24 September 2011
Facebook Makes Changes. But Is the Internet Invading People's Lives?
The changes on Facebook though are creating new enemies. They simply do not want Facebook, or Google for that matter, to define their lives. Why? When others start defining an individual's life, he/she feels as if he is losing his control of his life. People want to define themselves, therefore. When that ability seems threatened, they become angry--as noted in a Gary Stein post on ClickZ.
My friend Tracy came this close to giving up on Facebook. A social person by nature, she had gathered a good number of friends on the service. She also connected with the people she worked with and others whom were just passing acquaintances. She hooked back up with people she knew in college and high school and even someone from third grade. Along the way, she also became a fan of (and later "liked") a series of brands that she had some connection to or affinity for. Facebook became just what the founders wanted it to be: the central hub of her social life.
But, then, slowly, it moved from a nice, orderly hub to a chaotic mess. Not a mess in the way that MySpace became a mess, with blinking backgrounds and odd color combinations. No, it became an information mess. People Tracy hadn't spoken to in years were now informing her of what they were having for lunch. Long lost and little cared about connections were giving updates on workouts they just finished, movies they were watching, and virtual fish that needed virtual feeding. Facebook was beginning to bend under the weight of its core value proposition and she was ready to just turn it off. Facebook would have been one of those things that she did for a while, a couple years back. Read more.
"Honestly, it’s a bit annoying. Facebook users are starting to sound very much like Google haters," writes Frank Reed for MarketingPilgrim. "They recognize the importance of the platform and services as they relate to what they do in their lives but seem to want to see the mighty fall in process. I often wonder what would happen if so many Facebook haters got their wish and the service just got up and went away. That would be an interesting day because I suspect not too many of them would be genuinely happy." Read more.
Reed is describing the increasing common love/hate relationship individuals have with the major Internet service providers: People like the services but they do not like what these companies are doing with the information that they collect as people use the services. What does these mean for marketers--after all the only point of this class? Will this dislike grow or do the recent complaints amount to a tempest in a teapot? Should the hatred for these companies grow, will individuals use them? If they do not, what becomes of the marketers' social media marketing campaigns? More important, does a marketer want to have his/her product "associated" with a company whom others dislike?
21 September 2011
Facebook an Entertainment Hub? Maybe
Orabrush Goes Viral to Get Walmart's Attention
Google Adds +1 Button to Display Ads
20 September 2011
Mobile Coupons Growing Role
Search Engine Standings in August
Impact of Google's Purchase of Zagat, the Restaurant Review Site
The Future of Ad Networks
Capital One Marketing on Online Games
Google Wallet Almost Here
18 September 2011
Democratic National Committee Promotes Prez's Jobs Plan Online
Airlines Using Social Media Campaigns
17 September 2011
Universal Music Wins Internet Marketing Award
Brands Must Meet the Real-Time Demands of Customers
15 September 2011
Carhartt Starts Marketing Campaign on Facebook
Marketers Screw Up Social Media Marketing Campaigns
Another AdAge blog reported this problem: "A service called EdgeRank Checker revealed data this week that showed how using a third-party application -- like Hootsuite or Tweetdeck -- to update your Facebook Page decreases your engagement per fan (on average) by about 70%." Read more.
Google+ Trips after Strong Start
13 September 2011
Mobile Devices Changing the Nature of Search
Bing Lacks Behind Google but Catching Up with Facebook Via Twitter
Americans Spend 22.5 of Their Time Online Using Social Media
Twitter Ads Beat Facebook Ads
12 September 2011
Companies Rely More of Social Networks for Marketing
Bing Gains More Marketing Share on Google
11 September 2011
Social Media Plays Growing Role in Business
Toyota Goes with Yahoo's Fantasy Football
10 September 2011
Great Explanation of a Popular Form of Advertising--Pay Per Click
The Greater the Content, the Less Its Value
09 September 2011
Yahoo's Problems Reflect a Changing Web World
The post adds the following about trends in Internet advertising: "Advertisers are chasing what they say is more profitable prey — users of smartphones, video sites and social networks, and the companies that cater to them. Yahoo has always led in one of the most important corners of the advertising marketing: display ads, those that show images and video. But Facebook and Google are closing in on Yahoo, in large part because they can offer advertisers more personal information about users."
Marketing Idea Blows Up
The surprise: rather than being prepared by the chef, the lasagna they were served was Three Meat and Four Cheese Lasagna by Marie Callender’s, a frozen line from ConAgra Foods. ...“Our intention was to really have a special evening in a special location with Chef George Duran,” said Stephanie Moritz, senior director of public relations and social media at ConAgra. “The twist at the end was not dissimilar with what brands like Pizza Hut and Domino’s have done in the recent past with success,” she said, referring to hidden-camera advertising campaigns. ConAgra expected to use the footage for promotional videos on YouTube and its Web site, and for bloggers to generate buzz when they wrote about being pleasantly surprised.But it was the marketers, not the diners, who were in for the biggest surprise. Read more.
Bill to Protect Personal Info on Web
Advertising on Mobile Apps Could Become Easier
Walgreens Donates Flu Shots after a Visit to Its Foursquare or Facebook
08 September 2011
Google Uses Geo-Targeted Ads
Ford Use Virtual Ads to Get In-Person Sales
Ad Spending on Net Increasing Worldwide
07 September 2011
Social Media Increasingly Drawing Marketers--With Limitations?
Location-Based Apps Growing Popular
03 September 2011
Twitterers Don't Mind Promo Tweets
Search Results Improving
Consumers Want More Personalized Messages
Companies with Excellent Internet Marketing Campaigns Honored
02 September 2011
Users of Social Media and Marketers
What's Google Got that Facebook Don't--a Marketing Purpose
"Let's begin with Tumblr, a niche social-media site with a rabidly loyal and rapidly growing user base, which, according to The Wall Street Journal, is seeking a whopping $800 million dollar valuation, despite having absolutely no revenue model or brand offering. The most successful use of the platform by marketers thus far has been via 'reblog contests,' yet another gimmicky abuse of social media by brands essentially bribing users to promote their content," writes David Teicher of AdAgeDigital. "Which brings us to Facebook. What's so upsetting to the social-media marketer in me, is that despite the sheer number of consumers and businesses on the platform, many of whom want to engage with each other, the resulting engagement predominantly comes in one of two, equally ineffective forms." Read more.
01 September 2011
How RadioShack and Unilever Use Twitter-Based Advertising
30 August 2011
Using APA Citation for Previous Posts
When you quote or paraphrase an author, the citation immediately follows the quote or the paraphrase -- with no punctuation. "For example, this is an in-text citation for a quotation" (Author's Family Name, Year). For example, this is an in-text citation for a paraphrase (Author's Family Name, Year). At the end of your email, letter, presentation, or report, you will list the source on a separate Works Cited page. It appears as follows.
Family Name, First Name (Month Day, Year). Title with only the first word capitalized. Name of publication in italics. Retrieved from URL
Dunks Relies on Internet Marketing
"The Data: Dunkin' Donuts contacted bloggers to generate buzz for the campaign, but the offer relies primarily on Facebook and Twitter to drive consumer awareness and interaction. No contact information is being collected." (McKeefrey, 2011). Read more.
McKeefrey, Kevin (Aug. 1, 2011). Dunkin' Donuts urges customers to get Dunk'd for baseball tickets. Direct Marketing News. Retrieved from http://www.dmnews.com/dunkin-donuts-urges-customers-to-get-dunkd-for-baseball-tickets/article/208797/
Marketers Find Opportunities with Gamers
Phillips, Lisa (Aug. 2011). Online gaming audience: Lines blur as the market grows. eMarketer. Retrieved from http://www.emarketer.com/Report.aspx?code=emarketer_2000815
Twitter Catching on with Marketers
Maul, Kimberly (July 2011). Twitter advertising: Four marketers test the new ad platform. eMarketer. Retrieved from http://www.emarketer.com/Report.aspx?code=emarketer_2000776
Google+ Adding New Dimension to Social Media
Brews, Keryn (Aug. 30, 2011). Why marketers should pay attention to Google+. Marketing Web. Retrieved from http://www.marketingweb.co.za/marketingweb/view/marketingweb/en/page71654?oid=137418&sn=Marketingweb+detail&pid=71616
29 August 2011
International Online Advertising Increasing
Oser, Ken (Aug. 2011). Worldwide ad spending: online drives growth. eMarketer. Retrieved from http://www.emarketer.com/Report.aspx?code=emarketer_2000800.
Younger Buyers Check Out Brands on Social Networks
The 'American Millennials' survey, conducted by Barkley in advance of September’s Share.Like.Buy conference, found that over half of millennials, defined here as consumers ages 16 to 34, liked checking out brands on social media sites. That compared with just over a third of older adults" ("How Younger," 2011). Read more.
How Younger Adults react to brands on social networks (Aug. 29, 2011). eMarketerer. Retrieved from http://www.emarketer.com/Article.aspx?R=1008564.
Search Advertising Losing Market Share
What's search advertising? Advertising place ads on website, search result site and others, based on the information individuals use to search--primarily keywords. Market share: The percentage of the total marketplace to which an individual (or group of individuals) sell or buy.
Sullivan, Lauri ( Aug. 26, 2011). Searches reach $33 billion but lose market share. Media Post. Retrieved from http://www.mediapost.com/publications/?fa=Articles.showArticle&art_aid=157514
28 August 2011
comScore Ranks Internet Sites
Google Sites ranked as the #1 property in July with 182.3 million visitors, followed by Yahoo! Sites with 177.6 million and Microsoft Sites with 174.3 million. Ask Network jumped 1 position to rank #8 with 84.9 million visitors, while AT&T Interactive Network jumped 7 positions to #26 (38.4 million visitors). Fox News Digital appeared in the top 50 ranking at #46 with 26.1 million visitors.
"Top 50 Ad Focus Ranking
Google Ad Network led the July Ad Focus ranking with a reach of 93.3 percent of Americans online, followed by Yahoo! Network Plus (87.5 percent), AOL Advertising (87.2 percent), Yahoo! Sites (82.6 percent) and ValueClick Networks (82.0 percent)" (Flosi, 2011).
The company press release covered other findings, such as ticket purchasing sites were the most popular during July 2011. Read more.
Flosi, Stephanie Lyn (Aug. 19, 2011). Press Release: comScore Media Metrix Ranks Top 50 U.S. Web Properties for July 2011. comScore. Retrieved from http://www.comscore.com/content/download/9799/166281/file/comScore%20Media%20Metrix%20Ranks%20Top%2050%20U.S.%
20Web%20Properties%20for%20July%202011.pdf
Amazon Enters Online Advertising
Habegger, Jay (Aug. 11, 2011). Why Amazon is about to become a force in online advertising. Adage. Retrieved from http://adage.com/article/digitalnext/amazon-a-force-online-advertising/229205/
27 August 2011
Interactive (Internet) Marketing Growing
VanBoskirk, Shar (Aug. 25, 2011). Interactive marketing will spend nearly $77 billion by 2016. Forbes. Retrieved from http://blogs.forbes.com/forrester/?p=231.
Internet Radio Threatens Traditional Radio
What could this mean? Advertisers are not placing their ads on Pandora because they "like" it. Advertisers place their ads where they expect their primary audience (potential) buyers to be listening.
Titlow, John Paul (Aug. 26, 2011). As digital revenue goes up, will the web finally disrupt radio? NYTimes.com. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/external/readwriteweb/2011/08/26/26readwriteweb-as-digital-revenue-grows-will-the-web-final-92688.html?ref=internet.
Half of America Using Social Networks
Sengupta, Somini (Aug. 26, 2011). Half of America Is Using Social Networks. NYTimes.com. Retrieved from http://bits.blogs.nytimes.com/2011/08/26/half-of-america-is-using-social-networks/?ref=technology.
24 April 2011
Manufacturers Awarded for Frame Design
"Top industry names Rodenstock and Luxoittica were amongst the winners of the OptraAwards for the most inspiring frames of 2011 at Optrafair," according to OptometryToday. "
Luxottica achieved four accolades while International Eyewear and Marchon each achieved two. The winner of the female ophthalmic frame category was Luxottica with the Chanel black gloss acetate 3201 C501 with a delicate temple logo. Second was The Eyewear Company with Vanni V1084 C518, and third was Fashion Eyewear International with Dilem OFO53."
30 March 2011
TV Is King. Long Live the King?
Contrary to the way many of you wrote in your short reports, the Internet is not the king of media at least as far as advertisers are concerned. "The internet is consuming ever more of our waking moments, not to mention ever more ad spending, but that doesn't mean that traditional media is the loser. At least not when "traditional media" means TV," according to a post on AdAge.
20 March 2011
Companies with Internet Marketing Campaigns
Companies that run extensive Internet/digital/interactive marketing campaigns:
McDonalds (digital, interactive, internet)
Proctor and Gamble (digital, interactive, internet)
American Express (digital, interactive, internet)
Mountain Dew (digital, interactive, internet)
Domino’s Turns to Facebook for March Madnes
"Domino's Pizza launched a Facebook contest on March 14 encouraging consumers to vote for their favorite style of pizza," reports DMNews.com. "The delivery chain is promoting the contest to opted-in members of the company's e-mail database, as well as its Facebook fans."
Jameson and Guinness Zig and Zab
"Iconic Irish brands Jameson Irish Whiskey and Guinness are taking nontraditional approaches to their St. Patrick's Day promotional efforts this year," according to ClickZ.com.
An Interactive Marketing Campaign
Here's a ClickZ.com story about a marketer and its advertising agency parting company, but it also gives a hint at the marketing program: 'Burger King and Crispin Porter + Bogusky are parting ways, ending an agency-client relationship that produced some of the more celebrated interactive campaigns. Over seven years, CP+B's digital output for the burger giant included 'Subservient Chicken,' 'Whopper Sacrifice,' 'Sith Sense' and BK-branded Xbox titles that were sold cheaply in the chain's restaurants."
Social Networks Still Growing
"In 2011, 63.7% of US internet users will use social networks on a regular basis, amounting to nearly 148 million people. Although the pace of growth will be less dramatic in the next few years than it was in 2009 and 2010, usage will remain strong and shows no sign of declining. Marketers and media companies alike now know that in order to reach their audience, they must have a presence on social networks," goes the post on eMarketer.com.
17 March 2011
Display Advertising Up
"Total advertising expenditures increased 6.5% in 2010 and finished the year at $131.1 billion, according to Kantar Media." That's what a MarketingVox post noted. "Internet display advertising increased 9.9% compared to the prior year, the second largest growth rate among media sectors. Outdoor advertising was close behind with a gain of 9.6%."
Viral Marketing for “Limitless”
MarketingVox posted this item recently:
What: a video [watch it here] that went viral on YouTube recently purporting to show a man using his iPhone to hack a New York's Times Square' billboard.
What it Really Was: A promotion for the soon-to-be-released film "Limitless" developed by viral marketing company Thinkmodo (via the New York Times).
14 March 2011
Marketers Spending More
"Marketers modestly increased spending on various media in the fourth quarter of 2010, according to the Direct Marketing Association's quarterly business review. A majority of marketers also told the industry group they are optimistic about the near term," says DMNews.com. "A majority (54.7%) of marketers said they increased revenue generated from direct and digital marketing activity in Q4 2010 compared with the same period of 2009. Most marketers and suppliers (53.5%) said they are optimistic about their near-term profitability, yet fewer than half (46.1%) forecasted improved performance in the first quarter of 2011."
Can You Believe This? Small Businesses Don’t Use Websites
"Less than half (45%) of small businesses have websites, according to data analyzed by data management firm Formstack. However, this figure, recorded by Discover Credit Cards in 2009, still represents roughly 36% growth from 33% in 2007," according to a report on MarketingVox.com. "The most common reason given by small business owners lacking a website is that their business currently does not need one (41%). This is more than double the percent who gave the next-most-popular answer, cost (19%). The other leading reason is lack of time (16%)."
Chain Restaurants Turn to Social Media
"As the US restaurant industry recovers, operators are increasingly employing mobile and social media marketing to meet consumer expectations. Businesses that engage, provide value and reach potential diners where they spend their time will be at a distinct advantage." That's the word from eMarketer.com.
Car Manufacturers Spend More $ for Online Marketing
"To convert more browsers into buyers, auto marketers are revving up their online ad spending," reports eMarketer.com. " eMarketer estimates that online automotive advertising, including spending by manufacturers, dealer associations and dealers, will hit $3.24 billion this year, or 11.4% of total US online ad spending. Through 2015, it will grow faster than the overall online advertising market, at a compound annual growth rate (CAGR) of 15.7%."
10 March 2011
Advergames the “New” Social Media Advertising Forum
"Driven by the wildfire success of Zynga, the creator of popular social network games like 'Farmville' and 'Mafia Wars,' game developers are increasingly relying on advertising as a viable revenue stream -- and making the cost of advertiser entry quite low," according to AdAge. You might want to check the two games for companies that use Internet marketing, such as Coke, Ford, Toyota, and Pepsi.
Viral Video for Old Navy, Volkswagen, and Old Spice
"It's been a week of viral video turnover, with some new inductees (and a sole Super Bowl survivor) rounding out the most-viewed ads on the web." That's how AdAge
introduces its post about the viral videos (read Internet marketing videos) for Old Navy, Volkswagen, Old Spice, and Apple.
08 March 2011
Ideas for Long Report
Coke's Internet marketing campaign: http://www.google.com/search?q=Coke%27s+internet+marketing+&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a
Toyota's Internet marketing campaign: http://www.google.com/search?q=toyota%27s+internet+marketing+&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a
If you want to write about a company's Internet marketing campaign, go to Google.com. Type in the following: Companyname's Internet marketing campaign. You should get a long list of stories. Now you have to figure out which one's a relevant.
Nissan Allows Customers to Design Their Jukes
Creativity-Online
reports "Nissan is allowing customers to get creative and design their own versions of the Juke on its new Juke Studio website. It asked up-and-coming artists Jim Mahfood, Jeremyville and Tristan Eaton to create artwork representing each of the Nissan Juke's three driving modes (Eco, Sport and Normal). Their art became vehicle wraps that any Juke owner can purchase to customize their ride."
Kleenex Cleans Up with Facebook
"Samples usually are one-way, unrequested offers from marketers, and online sampling mostly involves signing up to get freebies yourself. But an offer this cold-and-flu season for Kleenex that lets people send free packs of tissues to [Facebook] friends and family has scored big," according to AdAge. "The Kimberly-Clark Corp. brand last week sent its millionth requested mini-box of tissues in North America. And the 'Softness Worth Sharing' campaign, aimed at introducing a new softer version of the tissue, has lifted market share 1.7 points since October, said Kleenex Brand Director Craig Smith. Nielsen data from Sanford C. Bernstein show Kleenex share up 3.9 points to 49.9% for the four weeks ended Feb. 19 vs. the period before the campaign began."
Toyota Working with Pandora
"Toyota and Internet radio provider Pandora launched a campaign March 4 that pairs one Toyota model with a Pandora genre radio station each month," according to DMNews. "At launch, the 'Legends & Icons' campaign partnered the Toyota Highlander SUV with Pandora's Top 40 genre station. The company is targeting 18-to-49-year-olds with this initial pairing, said John Trimble, chief revenue officer at Pandora, via e-mail. Consumers can view the campaign through the Web, mobile and tablet devices."
Companies Advertising on Skype
"Skype is launching its first ad platform, with Groupon, Universal Pictures and Visa Inaugural among the first companies to try out the format. The advertising will appear in the Home tab in Skype, starting this week, the company says. Ads will appear in the US, UK and Germany initially and then roll out on a wider basis," according to MarketingVox.
04 March 2011
Web Publishers Taking on TV
"In an effort to lure more lucrative brand advertising dollars to the web, the Interactive Advertising Bureau (IAB) anointed six new online ad formats Monday at its Leadership Conference in Laquinta, Calif. The ads were designed and chosen to play to marketers' calls for the bigger and more noticeable messages that in many ways is similar to TV advertising," reports AdAge.
Bing Beats Yahoo!
"Online marketing services providers may be interested in the news that Bing has become the second most popular search engine globally after overtaking Yahoo! for the first time," ClickThrough-Marketing. "According to research carried out by StatCounter, the Microsoft-backed search provider increased its worldwide market share to 4.37 per cent, ahead of Yahoo!'s 3.93 per cent."
Net Video Use Up in U.S.
"U.S. users spent almost 45 percent more time viewing online video in January 2011 than they did during the same period in 2010, according to data from The Nielsen Company," according to a ClickZ post. "According to estimates by the measurement firm, the total number of videos streamed and average streams per viewer also increased considerably in that time, growing by 31.5 percent and 27.5 percent, respectively. The number of unique viewers watching online video increased at a much slower rate, however, growing by 3.1 percent, year-over-year."
03 March 2011
UPS Store and Corona Launch March Madness Campaigns
"UPS Store, a division of UPS, has been running 'Print Madness' ads on Facebook.com. They require viewers to 'like' the brand's page before they can enter a contest for a trip to the NCAA Final Four Men's Basketball Championship."
American Airlines “More Liked”
Internet Marketing Power Shift, According to WSJ
"A realignment of power on the Web will continue this year, researchers at eMarketer predict, as Facebook grabs the top spot in the online market for banner, interactive and video ads," reports a WSJ article by Amir Efrati. "Meanwhile, Google will extend its dominance in the U.S. market for advertisements related to Web searches, the firm says. Despite an alliance between Microsoft's Bing search engine and Yahoo–which is now letting Bing power Web searches on its sites–Google is expected to increase its lead over those combined forces in terms of ad revenue in the U.S., eMarketer says, in a report scheduled for release Tuesday."
Yahoo! Slips behind Facebook in Display Ad Revenues—a First
"For the first time, the largest share of US display ad revenues will go to Facebook, eMarketer estimates. The social network's 80.9% growth in display ad revenues, to $2.19 billion this year, will mean Facebook sees 21.6% of all US display ad dollars," according to an eMarketer post. "That will put it ahead of Yahoo!, where eMarketer estimates display revenues will be up 16%. Yahoo!'s market share will inch up to 16.4%, while display gains at Google push the site's share of display spending to 12.6%. Meanwhile, AOL will drop from 5.3% of display ad revenues in 2010 to 4.4% this year."
01 March 2011
Short Report Instructions
You will simulate what business executives call an executive summary. Executive reports save time for top executives. Think of an individual who manages any large corporate, institution, government agency, or even country. For the president (executive officer) to keep abreast of the happenings in his organization, she/he needs information from a variety of departments. She, however, does not have the time. The executives in charge of the departments, therefore, send her summaries. As with any writing, each summary has an objective, which relates to the primary idea someone is attempting to show. So will your short report.
Format: The format of an executive summary resembles that of an email or letter: single-spaced and block paragraphs (no indenting). Unlike an email or letter, the writer gives the report a title but the writer does not put his/her name on the report. The writer centers the title, boldfaces it, and leaves it at the same point size of the report (Times New Roman, 12 pt). Look at these instructions. They follow the format.
Number of sources and citations: You will use a minimum of five sources, which must include the following: (1) either one of "Search Engines" or "Internet Marketing," (1) one of either "HD Marketing" or "Interactive Marketing," and (3) three original sources, whose links you picked up from the class blog. Within the report itself, you will use a minimum of two in-text citations per 300 words or 12 for this entire report. Do not include artwork (graphs, pictures, charts). They will appear in MLA style.
You will submit it to jconlin@bridgeport.edu on March 7 (not March 4) as a Word document attachment. Deadline: 11:59 pm.
Should you be thinking, "How can I write differently about Internet marketing," then I would suggest that you read more, or read more carefully, or re-read. Each time you add two ideas (which you would find in at least two of the articles) you get a new idea. For example, the mix of Celtic folk music and African folk music led to Blues and Bluegrass. Classical music and New Orleans Blues evolved into Jazz. From Blues/Jazz and Jute Joint Music came Rhythm and Blues in the 40s, which split into Rock n Roll and R&B and so on. Therefore, a student who has read the material and who has thought about how the material relates will have some ideas. So if your ideas have come up short, re-read the material carefully (do not read new material), take notes, and think about why some ideas seem important to you.
During the semester, I have given you several reasons why individuals find writing difficult. One remains, the one that drives even professional writers crazy.
Applied science and mathematics, engineering, and business administration ask four basic questions: who, when, what, and how. They rarely ask the question behind writing: Why? The question starts with children. Daddy (Mommy) why is the sky blue? Why does grandpa fart? Why do farts smell? As people age, the question becomes more complex. Why do I exist? Why do bad things happen to good people? Why does she (he) not love me? Most of us hate the question because it rarely evokes a definitive answer as you can get with business administration of engineering.
When writing, you ultimately are answering one question: Why should the reader believe you? Why should she/he trust you? Why should the reader give you her valuable time to read your ideas? The reader finds the answer to those questions in how you explain how one idea relates to another. You cannot trick the reader into belief. You first must discover why you believe by unearthing why one idea relates to another—for you. Then you explain that to the reader. The more you understand a subject, the more complex the relationship among ideas.
Finally, when I grade your work, I am concentrating primarily on how you present your material not on what you present.